Heey there (:
I'm wanting some real criticism on my story, so I can mature as a writer (: You, as a reader and a writer, have an opinion that counts in my books.
The story is called The Birds, the Bees and Everything in Between. It's about a girl with bipolar, and it follows her story of when he life falls apart and she's left to pick up the pieces.
I hope that I not only entertain readers, but also introduce people to a stigma that sweeps all of the world, in reference to Mental Health.
I hope that you take the time to read my story, and I promise to return the favour if needed.
xoxo erin;