MidnightPoison

Hey! I read your story 'Last Half-witch alive' and it is one of the best stories I've read here. It's hard to believe you're thirteen though-you've got loads of potential.
          I'm looking forward to reading more of your interesting story so do upload soon=)
          Oh and if it's not too much for you, can you read my stories too? I'd really appreciate that ♥♥♥

empressofthepen

Heey there (: 
          
          I'm wanting some real criticism on my story, so I can mature as a writer (: You, as a reader and a writer, have an opinion that counts in my books. 
          
          The story is called The Birds, the Bees and Everything in Between. It's about a girl with bipolar, and it follows her story of when he life falls apart and she's left to pick up the pieces. 
          
          I hope that I not only entertain readers, but also introduce people to a stigma that sweeps all of the world, in reference to Mental Health. 
          
          I hope that you take the time to read my story, and I promise to return the favour if needed. 
          
          xoxo erin;

tiki505

hey could u cheak out my story "hi pplls of da world" it only one page but still and i know u proboley wont read this cuz wen i read the first sentene and i see that they say could u cheak out my story i dont read the rest so i will still give it a shot so can u please cheack it out for me and maybe even vote, comment,fan 
          thanks 
          tiki505