@EdenGarden0 it's okay author-nim you're already awesome writing it for the first time. You did well on how you convey the feelings of the characters and their personalities to TWICE. Great Plot! Write more fanfics soon.
@gplqnr thanks for appreciating the story ☺️, sorry for the grammatical errors tho
English wasn't my first language, and it's my first time writing fanfics.