Umm....OKay I suck at socializing, so any part od my feedback which looks rude and offensive I totally apologize for it! :D
AMBER! Hie, I ain't here to rant about my story, instead I wanted to give a feedback, so let's be cliché, I LOVE YOUR STORY, but I don't think your story chapters go in sink.
Much love,
TL
P.S: I apologize agin, coz it was just a mere attempt by me, to give an honest feedback...so...yeah!