Check out “Legions Fall” and let me know what you think. I’d love some feedback. I’ve been working on this story for quite some time and finally decided it was time to share. The first 10 chapters are available now if you want to continue. You can see the many characters of the realm in the characters section chapter. The story is loosely based on Greek Mythology, but you will find that the realm is ultimately ruled by “The Big Five”. Beyond them we have their Prodigy, the Divinity, many mythological creatures, and then finally mortals (this also includes witches). The Divinity are winged beings with various abilities and /or elemental powers determined by which of “The Big Five” that they descend from. I would enjoy early feedback on the title, cover art, and world building. If you find you have any questions as you read please feel free to comment.
Oh and happy reading!
XO- Webbiegail
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