sapphicstellar

What happened to your Jemma story?

ChogiwaForever

@Lovey81962 I with u on I was in Loveeeeeeeeeee with that book!
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sapphicstellar

@wehearteww Oh. What about the fans?
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wehearteww

@Lovey81962 i deleted it, i didnt want it up anymore.
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ngrundy19

I forgot to mention she is a kanay.  MORE REASONS I LOVE YOUR STORY
          
          3. Plot. The plot is so interesting. It's not so far from the show, but it's far enough that it's unique.
          
          3. Your suspense makes me wanna read more.
          
          5. I love how you developed Emma. He still cries a lot like she would in the show, but she still has some type of backbone.
          
          6. I love their parties . It makes them more fun.
          
          7. The story is like a series. People come and go and it always leave ou on your toes. It is well written. No fluff. 
          
          8. Everyone has more than one personality. Unlike the show, there is a part to everyone that is hidden. The show doesn't show it as well. Emma's backbone shows more, Andi's gushy side, ect. The show shows the obvious ones like Jax's sweet side, but yours has more.
          
          9. Yours isn't as PG as the show. Teens aren't PG and you show it.
          
          10. Even though it's fiction, it's kind if realistic. Yours is real and truthful. No crappy TV reactions. It's what people would ACTUALLY do. I love the show, but Yours is more real.
          
          11. It makes me think differently of the show . Now when I watch EWW , I expect to see Mac and parties and Marisol. Then I remeber, WAIT ITS FANFICTION so after I watch it I read your latest chapter over.
          

ngrundy19

Name: Sierra 
          Hair Color: Brown 
          Eye Color: Brown
          Love Intrests: Lucas
          Sport: Cheerleading and Track
          Reason at Iridium: Mother sent her for a better life. Living with her god mother, who is Andi's mom. So she lives with Andi. 
          Description: She has curly hair (like Maddison Pettis) and she is mixed. She's friends with Emma ,Andi, and grebe miss with Marisol . She's from Detroit . Her personality is a mix of Andi and Gabby. She is sassy, but not rude. She can handle herself , but plays the damsel role sometimes. She's a boy magnet. She dresses girly though. Not prissy , but girly. Including skirts and crop tops and cute graphic tanks . 
          
          Other Details: marisol is nice to her , except for when she flirts with Lucas. She is Andi's god sister, so she is close to her and Emma. 
          
          Reasons I love your story?
          
          1. I love your OCs. There are some , but not too many. They have their own styles and personalities and stories. I like how they fit in the story.
          
          2. I love your couples. Like how you developed the Demmax love triangle and Mandi is life<3. 
          
          This is one of my fave stories on watt pad. thank you

wehearteww

thanks for entering ! love your form :)
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lexiboop18

Ur story is really good u put in a lot of people thoughts of what u think they want but u also make it a mystery 
          Eye color blue 
          Hair color blue 
          Sports volleyball I forget the rest of the form lol but even I I don't get picked I love ur story plz continue