wereshapeshifter101

@acidxrebellion It's good. I love the story and I just can't believe that a fifteen year old can write that well. Lots of people who post on here are older than that and can no write anywhere near as well as you can. Keep up the good work! ; )

Nunatak

Hello there, weres, 
          
          I know what you're thinking, "Oh great . . . another boring, annoying request," right? I won't deny that this probably is annoying, and I would like to apologize for bothering you, but I would also like to say that I would gladly return the favor, and give you a decent, thoughtful, constructive, review with honest feedback! 
          
          Anyways, I'm new to Wattpad, but I'm pretty familiar with the messed-up generalization-promoting dynamics of the site already, and I can say (or hope, at least) that my characters are not Mary/Gary Sues, and my plot is not a literary rehash of insulting things. I will not guarantee that every little typo is fixed, but it is generally grammatically accurate.  I'm trying to keep it real despite that the genre is fantasy, mystery, and crime/action-thriller. 
          
          Here is a synopsis of my temporarily titled "Grimminally Ever After": 
          
          Affluence? Gone. 
          Living apparatus? Gone. 
          Multi-million corporate inheritance? Gone. 
          Legacy and all dignified reputation? Gone. 
          
          Welcome to the life of former Wall Street-mastermind-in-the-making and ex-Manhattan socialite, Lion du Moreau--whose most current transaction involve "migrating to an obscure village no one knows about with idiotic idealists for adoptive parents." Lasthaven's the strangest place in the world, where the the residents are hardly even sane, for the most part, or even physiologically credible! Lion is forced to take on a job he has absolutely no experience in, or even doesn't resent, but in life, you don't get what you want. Join this strangely determined careerist on his thrilling journey of cracking logic-defying cases, all the while dealing with depression attacks,and having every principle he ever stood by put to the test, as well as the most aggravating, pseudo-sadistic, mentally unstable, yet lovably and hatefully ingenious partner known in case-closing history! 
          
          That's not the whole thing, but thanks for the time, for reading this! 
          -Solfatara

kirsty1000

Hey! thank you so much for fanning me!!!!!! i love that people are taking the time to read my story - thank you soooooooooooo much! 
          
          i don't know if you'll like my other story or not - it's not a paranormal one its just a plain old love story but it's quite sweet, not sure if that's you thing.........
          
          i don;t think i'll be updating Alpha Bloodlines tomorrow but it will be the day after at latest so i hope you'll check it out then! thanks for comments and Votes!!!
          
          Kirsty xx

luvtrencher

Hey, I know you might not have the time, but when you can would you please check out my story?
          It's called:
          Is It Love? Or... Was it Never Meant to be?
          
          I promise I would read your story too, when I've got the time, if you could just private message me or write it on the message board. Much would be appreciated.
          
          thanks .
          hugs a millions! (:
          luv303 ♥♥♥

Aetila

Hey there! 
          If you've got some extra, bored, time; I was wondering if you could read one of my stori es and comment on it! (voting , fanning, and whatever are all optional, its the reviews I need!) I'd love to return the favor, and I will! 
          I know this might annoy you, but anything is greatly appreciated! Thanks for reading this! 
          -Celeste 
          My Stories--Golden Dawn; Karis Gebelin was just your typical Hawaii transplant to Manhattan, obsessive top student who actually procrastinates everything, and bound of Ivy; future careerist and current fortune teller. Until-- that is--she finds out everything she aced is more or less a ben trevato-- so good bye model student and striving socialite--and hello demons layer/alchemist and automatic industry tycoon--that is, if she survives. 
          
          Pride, Prestige, and The Undead-- When Aislinn LeBlanc went to boarding school, she expected to be working hard and standing out with her scholastic honors and economist talents in a sea of high-society spoiled brats in their opulent playground. Little did the senator's daughter know, however, that she was entering a world where your rich and famous can kill, slaughter, and hack things like no one's business.African mythology, action, and secrets of success all come together in this tale of zombieslaying and prestige. 
          
          Empire Wars-- Kiers was fed up with his life in a small town in Iowa--until, that is, when he and his friends are offered to risk life and mind to test a new breakthrough "video game." Empire Wars was designed to be the most difficult game in the world, where dying is just too easy.
          
          P.S. I know you get a lot of these, but I'll say it; I really don't think my main characters are Mary Sues & Gary Stus, they aren't gorgeous, extremely talented, maybe have one talent, but that's it. My stories also are not centered around one cliche relationship between two gorgeous people or whatever, and I really hope you can try comment! 
          Thank you for the time!