whatmasterpiece

New updates to my short story; https://www.wattpad.com/748197044-prologue-g-o-d

thebeingunknown

Wanna say congrats for almost 1k reads on your story! I've been seeing it climb up! 

thebeingunknown

@whatmasterpiece I think you'll do just fine in the genre :)
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whatmasterpiece

Thank you for your support it’s really appreciated. Hopefully I can break into the science fiction category at some point!
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thebeingunknown

Hey! Sorry if it seems like I'm pelting you with notifications. I could really use feedback on my own story right about now as I'm having trouble getting readers to begin with, lest being very interactive with it. Do you think you can read the first couple of chapters and point out anything that should be fixed that I missed?