Helloo
So, a few days ago, I really wanted to read a good fanfiction about Eric, a really good one. And as I was reading through some story's summaries I feared I might be wasting time with a story which is at first good, but turns out to be bad, boring and full of clichés. Sorry for the mean words ;P
I then decided to read yours and - I don't regret it at all! I absolutely chose the right fanfiction and I loved it from the very beginning and am looking forward to reading your updates.
First of all the storyline is amazing, not boring and not too (!) much action. Thanks for also creating such awesome minor characters like her friends! Instead of just putting Dove in the initiation year of Tris and letting her be friends with already existing characters, you put so much effort and talent in creating new ones.
Additionally, I love how you portray Dove, the way she waits for her first sex and does not just do it because her bf wants it. You can relate to her.
As far as I can say, this is one of the best fan fictions I've read, so I hope this motivates you to keep updating
All the best! ❤