whimrose

Hello readers! I have my semester examinations ongoing till the 27th of this month.  This story will be updated on 29th. Thank you 

ralhan16

@whimrose all the best for your exams
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whimrose

Just published a new chapter after a long break — would love to hear your thoughts on it!
          Also, with over 40 chapters in and the story still going strong, I'm starting to run low on ideas.
          Let me know what kind of plots you'd like to see next!

AAA_mania

@whimrose Dear Author, I hv replied to U on Ur idea question but writing all dos replies, one more nd d most imp thing I forgot to write
            Nd thts U r a fabulous writer. I dont knw mch about other online reading platforms. I drove in here, to read Prashiv FF, trying filling d void created by my Prashiv after d show ended. Here I read mny FF stories. I read urs too nd I am really impressed wid ur storyline, pace of story, writing style, Prashiv version. Here, Ur Shivansh is really d way V all wanted him in d show. Love him a lot. How U hv worked on describing internal turmoil stirring dem from d start is all my heart ❤️. I really could picturise each moment nd could feel deir each emotion. Nd how U hv described Shivansh nd his deep care for Prarthana, specially in track of marriage consummation is phenomenal. I found only dis work on Ur profile... If U write on other platforms, tht I don't knw but as it's ur only work here nd if it's Ur first creation den I tell U tht Ur writing is  exceptionally excellent. Thank U for such great story on Prashiv. Plz don't stop nd keep writing on dem. I always will be d most over enthusiastic one for giving support as well as irritation through  ideas, votes, nd lengthy comments etc when it's about my Prashiv ❤️ Request U to write more on dem, more stories or set of one shots - anything What U can manage. Dis same story has so mny angles which can be explored as per my thinking. Plz keep writing, U r an amazing writer ❤️
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AAA_mania

@whimrose Ur storyline nd plot is superb nd d pace also great... I really loved d way - the love made its way between Prashiv
            It wud be great if U cud write on above track in dis story as after dis much intimacy, it wud b a start of transformation of trust to unshakable faith
            Further, parallely,
            Can U plz work on d Prarthana's study part as well as on deir growing relationship ? 
            Means Shivansh is supporting her so well nd vry firm tht she must study further wht she likes... So she completes ger study in her fav. subjects wid help of Shivansh nd den helping  Shivansh in his business
            Or... she establish her own identity through sum business or school or coaching
            Still no honeymoon track for dem... Some track where honeymoon plan starts wid deir Missing of flight, den Prarthana being prarthana forces him to go by road nd den deir honeymoon bcum adventurous nd thrilling due to sabotage if vehicle on road near forest
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AAA_mania

@whimrose In connection of my idea on Prashiv story
            Part 2 : But @ tht time Shivansh reaches to save her. He thrashes nd tackles Raunak for troubling his wife nd  get him arrested. Before going wid police Raunak throws copies of  dos pics on Shivansh's face nd leaves wearing winning smile. Prarthana scared tht Shivansh's anger wud burst any moment as he sees dos pics, she get scared tht he wudnt trust her ever, but he stays mute nd leave for home wid her, he doesnt speak a word out till reach back to home. When dey reach back nd go to deir room, still Shivansh doesn't say a word nd tht thing breaks her, fear of losing him ripping her heart off but den even she tries to talk to him nd start to explain him all matter, his expression unreadable, not uttering a word, seeing tht,  she break down in tears mid talk, Shivansh den consoles her taking her in embrace nd explain her tht he got d idea tht something was wrong when he saw her worried nd lost nd so he found out d reason his way nd den wait till Raunak's demand to her so he cud b caught red handed nd given to police...in fact he says sorry to her for not telling her everything prior but he wasn't sure if she wud be able to act normal after knowing all facts nd may be scared... Prarthana shares tht she was scared tht he wudnt trust her nd wud be mad on her,at tht time Shivansh tell her tht he trusts her more den himself, loves her d most den, moreover he knows how mch she loves him nd how good at heart, loyal nd innocent she is to cheat on him, nd so he never can doubt on her or can be angry on her  bcoz of other's fault,den he demands a promise tht she wud never hide anything from him, whatever or however d matter wud be, but she wud share d tiniest thing of her life nd each problems wid him always
            As in show it was horrible when Shivansh doubted her, it wud b satisfying reading dem dis way
            
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whimrose

Hello my readers, I have my exams next week. I'll try to update this weekend else ,please keep some patience 
          Honestly overwhelmed by the response to the book, completely unexpected. I want the quality of the content to be intact and improvised hence, I want to write only when I get ample time