NightArchers

Hi sorry for the inconvenience but can I borrow a little bit of your time, I just wanna plug my story, and I hope you can visit it, here's the link if you're interested..
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/296187580?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=NightArchers&wp_originator=VDTYyx88M7PBmaRSPdKpMlsc%2Bq3nOzcJ5eUSGk6CSDKjLL67PjdDKZnF%2FN9ztDKCnW9yVaf8VfAivcYV%2BTP3eBykh%2FCdRGzmcigAeXq86R1tEfQISuQK7vfDcrI6DrFw
          
          sorry for plugging, thank you!!

stupidawtor

Darius Luan Sarmiento was a quiet, innocent nerd who was also a great guy. He lives a simple but happy life.
           
          Until he meets Neyah Aizel Florez, a badass girl.
           
          Everyone feared her because of her dark aura, except Luan. He doesn't see her as  bad like everyone thought. 
           
          Love will form in their relationship. Their bond can best be described as bittersweet. Because of their love, it was as sweet as sugar, but as bitter as it was all a lie.
           
           
          Is she really into him, or is she just acting?
           
          Will he allow her to ruin his innocence or not? 
           
          Will they fight for their relationship if it was a lie in the first place?
           
          Will they fight for each other even though everyone is against it?
           
           
          Hello a pleasant day to each everyone of you, Sorry for shamelessly plugging my very own special story. The title is 'She's Bad' I highly appreciate it if you could give some little time to visit my story. Kindly visit this profile for more info. That's all thank you, Have a Great Day everyone 
           
          Let's support each other stories 
           

Onyx_Spades

Your 30 month writing challenge is impressive but looks a little unorganized from a readers stand point.  I would suggest having a prompt preplanned for your thirty days. Like when artists have words; three words for a day then they try to drawl something to that matches the words they have.  So everyday you aren't struggling in the middle to have something unique you have an idea.  To keep it random have a 1-30 number generator crossing off the ones you have already done. In the intro, tell the reader this a little action romance so they get a feel for what they are bout to read and at the end have a little taste of what's to come like tomorrow is monarchy, fire and griffin but also gives you time to think about the words your working with.  It's just a personal suggestion, you don't have to listen. 

whimsy_lux

@Onyx_Spades Yo this is actually smart, the thing is, I'm not. The main reason why I did it this month is that I'm in this writing camp, each day there's a daily which is usually a prompt, and doing it gives you points. Most of these stories are results of these prompts, I just don't know what they are til that day at 8 pm my time, hence the randomness. Also sometimes they aren't things I feel fit the challenge like a personal letter to yourself or critiquing another writing piece, so I have 4 hours to think of an idea and write it. Thanks for the feedback, I think I will try to plan 10 days but If I ever do this again, I'll probably use already thought-out prompts like you said. Also thanks so much for the compliment!
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