KaylaAdeline
Hey! Would you mind checking out my poetry? I’d love to hear your thoughts. Here's a quick sample, hope you have a great day! When the clock strikes midnight I will not flee the scene. I will stand before you As my dress disintegrates Into an oversized T-shirt Perfume replaced with sweat. You will choose your future At the end of the night Because I Am my own fairy godmother And I break My own spells.
KaylaAdeline
@whoisIQ yeah this is about just being in control of your own future basically. Thanks for the feedback
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whoisIQ
@KaylaAdeline absolutely. Also, I have a question. Is this sample you recreating Cinderella escape from the ball but in your imagination? Or it has a deeper meaning? And I personally wished you wrote Tee instead of T-shirt. I actually read it as tee and didn't realize it was Tshirt instead. Plus it rhymes with scene. :)
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