ArielleWeekly

Thank you for voting on Evergreen! What do you like or hate about it so far?

whosgotthetime

@MichaelWeekly I think you're doing a wonderful job already! To be honest, I'm not sure which of the characters I connect with most. All of the characters are so relatable and well-made, I can't seem to choose. They're all so clearly unique. They seem like real people, which makes it hard to pick favourites. I think I appreciate them all pretty equally, but I also think that part of that comes from the fact that they're a team. A team is a group of people who all have something to contribute, and I think it's really neat how you incorporated that into the story many times. You gave done a fabulous job in your story, and I can't wait to read more. :)
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ArielleWeekly

@vivernator aw i'm really happy you're enjoying the read! I can't wait to hear what you think of the ending! It was a total switch with what I originally write and it's a mix of Alice in Wonderland and Power Rangers! I definitely think I need to work a bit more on showing and not telling so I can trap you even more in the book. Have you connected with any of the characters? Who have you connected with the most? 
            
            Thanks again for reading and following me <3
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whosgotthetime

@MichaelWeekly it is an amazing book! You have so much talent, it's breathtaking at times. I love how the mystery of the book is neverending, but so well planned out. However, what never fails to astound me, is the creativity put into evergreen. Reading such an original book makes me truly feel like I am a in another world. Thankfully I haven't finished yet, but I can't wait to see what awaits me. Thank you so much for the brilliant read! 
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elveloy

Hi! Thanks for voting for my story, Suns :)

elveloy

@vivernator Thank you!! :)
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whosgotthetime

@elveloy you're absolutely welcome! I really enjoyed it and I'm sure I will enjoy any more books of yours that I read. You are quite gifted at writing. I especially loved your unique style - it's not something that many people could do so well.
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SusanWard

Just noticed you finished Dark Heroes Forever, thank you so much for finishing and voting!! May I ask for your thoughts on it? 

SusanWard

@vivernator Thank you so so much! I love feedback a lot and I'm doing my best to make it perfect before I publish it. Also working on the sequel as we speak! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
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whosgotthetime

@SusanWard it was really good! The part that I found most amazing was how you not only kept it going, but kept me intrigued. That's rare. Most times I like the first ending and that's it. And I don't read the sequel or anything. Somehow you managed to keep me interested, come up with all sorts of new things, stay true to the characters and maintain flow. Also, I felt like there was a really good balance of events and locations. Many authors will make everything about training and then never write about the actual fight. Or if they do it will be very short without much effort. I feel like you dabbled in many different areas and managed to do it very well. Your book was effortless and engaging the whole way through. I loved it and would definitely recommend it to others. 
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SusanWard

Thanks for voting on Dark Heroes Forever! 

SusanWard

@vivernator thank you! And don't forget to leave me feedback! I'm trying to make it perfect! :)
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whosgotthetime

@SusanWard oh my goodness! You are 100% welcome. It's so well-written; how could I not?
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