whothis123

Episode 15 & 16 of my YouTube series ‘Merlin: An Alternative Ending’ is out now!
          	
          	Episode 15: https://youtu.be/vD0NzqasnqU
          	
          	Episode 16: https://youtu.be/h2eO4atz7Ag

MaSaTo0

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Merlin say that he is appropriate the thing he have done by magic council. But he couldn't accept that because he didn't intent to be alive that long and bla bla bla... Merlin beg Arthur to kill him. He says that he tried by falling from the cliff into the river but it didn't work. The only thing that can do it, is Excalibur. Arthur never gonna let that happen. He call the magic council immediately and raises the problem. Kilghara is there too with the help of flames. And after hours and hours they decide to meet the Sidhe. Sidhe tells him there is only one unsure way that maybe works. If a thousand of magic creatures come together and focus their magic on the young warlock maybe he can defeat the darkness. So they all agreed to do that. And the members all called their people to come over in Camelot and trying to rescue their precious leader. Meanwhile Merlin get conscious and found Lancelot asleep his side of bed. He reaches to Arthur's chambers slowly and in pain and look for Excalibur. The same time he reaches it Arthur and Lancelot find him and freaking out.  Merlin put the pointy end of the sword on his chest and intent to kill himself. His face is coverd by tears. They try to stop him by words but Merlin had made his decision.  finally he pushes the sword into his ches a bit. His milky sleep tonic now have a dark dark red stain but in that second alator came and shouts some spells that merlin collapse immediately.
          
           So after a few days when everybody arrive, they do what they meant to do and it works after couple of hours. Everybody becom tired and exhausted. Some of them that wasn't too strong fall asleep just the time ceremony had finished. Merlin not going to heal immediately. But start to be healthy and well in few months. The golden come back in his eyes eventually. And accept the leadership of magic council. 
          
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          I will send the second suggestion tomorrow. :)))

MaSaTo0

Hello. 
          I think you are a bit in trouble about how to proceed with your stories.
          I wanted to give you some suggestions for "The Aftermath (2)". I hope it can help you to continue the story well.
           And sorry for my mistakes. English is not my first language. 
          
          Suggestion(1): 
          Ignore the end of the last chapter. While Arthur and the knights decide to return to Camelot, it soon gets dark and they are forced to camp somewhere.
          
          At the same time, Dimitri has come to hunt an animal for dinner for his family and his seriously ill guest. He sees the royal group. He takes them to Merlin. 
          
          
          Merlin is still half conscious. He has a fever and his chest pain has taken his breath away. Anna and Dimitri have to keep him asleep or unconscious most of the time otherwise his moans of pain will continue for hours or maybe even days.
          Arthur sees the black spread on Merlin's chest and panics. With Anna and Dimitri and their few magic skills, he returns Merlin to Camelot, but no one knows what's happening to Merlin. Arthur has only one way. Iseldir and Alator. He goes to see them and asks about it. They give him little information and avoiding to give more. He suddenly remembers Kilghara. Kilghara is always aware of everything. He wants them to at least arrange a meeting for him and Kilghara.Outside of Camelot, after a verbal but fiery brawl, Kilghara tells Arthur all about it. Arthur feels broken. He now knows all this time Merlin was in pain. And what have he done for bringing him back from death and the cost of it. He couldn't just let him becom an evil, neither let him be in such a pain that nobody can't even imagine.
          Arthur get back Merlin and ask Anna and Gaius to let him to be a bit conscious. After minutes become like years that they speak and cry and lots of tears and also a kiss from Arthur on Merlin's sweaty forehead.(It's one of the most emotional conversation that they ever had)
          
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MaSaTo0

Hello. I hope you're doing well. I'm really worry about your health because you just stop both of your storys in a such a sensitive point. If you are there pls take care. And just wanted to say we all love how you write. Just be well.

whothis123

Chapter 40 of ‘A Forgotten Destiny (merlin) is out now!
          
          Caden becomes a knight of Camelot but worries for what the future will bring.
          
          Note: not an overly eventful chapter but the story is about to pick up pace again very soon!

whothis123

Chapter 39 of ‘A Forgotten Destiny’ is out now!
          
          Gaius seeks out the help of some of Emrys’ old friends,
          Whilst Caden begins to get ready for the knighting ceremony with a few surprise visitors and heart to hearts.