Blackbeauty_63
Hey,
First of all, the story is super good. T
Please continue with whatever you have in your mind fir the characters, don't cut it short or speed up or take a time jump coz of any kind of of pressure. This could easily get approved as a special episode if officially submitted to gmmtv. Toughluck, they're only accepting stories from thailand in thai. If you have any friends or so done you know who can translate this properly and send it across on behalf of you, please try that
Secondly, I genuinely love the pacing of the story, how they go through tough thi gs together, finding hope in the smallest things, trying to move as a pack than focusing on self growth. And most importantly, the lobe and affection between shin saint and chingching. Hoping to see more of them together in simple and heartwarming moments. Thanks for writing this feel good story which also gives a hope to the readers that the world is not that bad as people tend to portray it. There are genuine relationship and friendship scattered in regular life, to find that kinda human beings we have to be one first ❤️
whyactually
@Blackbeauty_63 Well, to be honest this is probably my first and last work, so seeing how much you actually get what I tried to portray is more than just amazing. No trying to sound like a narcissist, but that actually feels incredible. I couldn’t overlook the guilt because, well, I somehow relate to it, too. And he portrayed his feelings really well in Hugh school frenemy, ignoring that would have been a crime. I had to watch the series and clips to get familiar with their way of talking, from the middle of this story (that's why the later chapters have more conversations than the first ones.) I have been giving all my efforts to make the story something comforting, something that feels like home. Sort hearing that the story feels like a safety net to you - is probably the best reward I could ever receive for my writing. The best compliment I have ever received so far. Thanks for being so supportive. If it wasn't for you, I would have probably already ended the story somehow. I don't know you, but you have my blessings. May Allah multiply the happiness you have given me and return it back to you. Well, I am also that kind of an antisocial introvert in real life. I am often considered to be dead when it comes to online communication (for vanishing) and outstandingly awkward in every kind of social interaction. So thanks for the chance to be a chatterbox here. When I finish the story, will you mind if I mention your name in the story description? (Well, I understand privacy concerns, just wanted to say how thankful I am....)
whyactually
@Blackbeauty_63 Someone should tell you that you are the kind of reader a writer would dream to have. I will reply to you properly when I finish writing the next chapter. I guess that will probably be a better way to say thank you, I mean that's all I can do. I will try to be back with a new chapter and reply to you as soon as possible. Stay safe and take care
