silverwolf

I also like your book with the random thoughts, that's so original, well done ❤️

@katraya thankyou so much, I am a new author and I love to hear positive feedback, I will work on the longer chapters!!  ;)

@S4mystery I really liked how the main character has overcome bullying and hardship, and how she is oddly strong and no one knows why. I think it will be interesting to see how her emotional walls soften throughout the story. I do think that you could greatly improve your story by editing and adding more detail, because I do think that the chapters should be a bit longer for more content.

@katraya  If I ever were to publish I want a ship out in water like that first one, a girl in breeches and lace shirt, boots, brown long hair blowing, by a dinghy with a group of boys 'sword fighting' in the sand of to the side :D lol my dream cover