S4mystery
Thankyou sooo much for voting and enjoying my story xx
wildandbi
@S4mystery I really liked how the main character has overcome bullying and hardship, and how she is oddly strong and no one knows why. I think it will be interesting to see how her emotional walls soften throughout the story. I do think that you could greatly improve your story by editing and adding more detail, because I do think that the chapters should be a bit longer for more content.
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