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wildfireyip
Jan 28, 2017 02:12AM
I hope you read my short story I know it just has one chapter I just need the feedback so I can make it better #thinksView all Conversations
Story by Yip_one
The mistakes
Just like I said before if you don't like the story just tell me and I'll change it or keep it and start anot...