willdestory69

@JayRabies I absolutely loved you story it was fun and exciting. The only problem i had with the story itself was the fact that their there was a few inconsistencies in the story. I wonder  are you ever going to write a sequel to the story, I would love that and I have a few ideas. Now I'm going to go download the rest of your stories and I'm going to rip them apart!! Wish me luck.