@cinziax18 Hey! So I read your story and it was actually pretty good. One thing I'd work on is the summary; you repeat the word 'school' a lot (sorry I'm kind of a grammar freak) and also, maybe you could shorten it to draw in the reader? I feel like if you just put one paragraph as your summary including the fact that (1) her parents are abusive, (2) she's going to a new school, and (3) she looks just like Caleb Woods, you'd have an interesting summary that makes the reader curious instead of just having the whole plot of the book in the description (no offense or anything.)
I hope this helps and good luck with your story :)
