willieverupdate

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I want to update my stories but every time I open them to write something I get stuck on the 1st person writing. Idk why I did that I hate it so much lol. I’m thinking of rewriting all my stories to 3rd person bc 1st person makes me CRINGE now fuck

Daleann13

@willieverupdate I think you did brilliant with the first person writing in Break Me Free. It made you feel what he was going through. It gave a real impact. I am a survivor of child abuse (my stepdad). A lot of what you wrote, I felt the same, but had a hard time expressing it. I am glad you could. I wish you could publish it, not only to give a voice to those who suffer, but also to help others see and understand the survivors. I understand writers block. I use to write a lot, could never finish a story though. Endings are hard. I just want to say great job and I hope your block will dissolve soon.
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MelRTH

@willieverupdate I'm rooting for you. I just finished reading Break Me Free, and I loved it!
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lolz_unemployed

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I don't know why, but I'm pretty much like Jayden in Break Free, just that I can't seem to cry at all. I have been really struggling to express my emotions. Reading this story makes me feel somehow safe. Maybe it's just my emotions swallowing me whole from letting me spit the words out. I know I may type shit here, but this is what I feel. Thank you, author!

sylvahelena

OMG, I'm crying while typing this... Break free is great, i love it.. OMG it felt so real.. I really love this book and I'm looking forward to read your other books (just added them my library?..
           Tf... The tears are still streaming out... 
          
          Great work..