@willtedflowers
https://www.wattpad.com/story/404560312?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=willtedflowers The Offering is my very first book, it's not perfect and I may need to do some revisions here and there. if you see any mistakes or typos, don't be afraid to point them out! I'll really appreciate it! thank you.
Hello everyone, thank you to those who have been reading my story, giving feedback and voting. it truly means a lot!
Hey~ I found you from Reddit, I'll definitely check out your book and support however I can!
@hoshontilusa wow thank you so much, I really appreciate it
I suffer from fatigue, so it is difficult for me to find time to read on here. I will read a couple of your chapters though. Thank you Dyna for replying to my message about muting/blocking, you were the only one who replied! I hope you have a good experience on here. I have loved it and made friends with all ages and all nationalities which is, for me, the best part of all. See you soon!
@dramaticc16 - That's good. It is hard to explain.
@Polllardii Yes I do understand what you meant by changing tenses, I watched a few videos on using tenses correctly and it really helped. Thanks again
@dramaticc16 - Did you understand what I meant by changing your tenses? It is hard when starting out writing to understand everything. There is so much to learn! I will try to give you an explanation on the last paragraph of your first chapter.
