i dont know whether u will read dis or not but i want to suggest u some point which u shojld add in ur story...plz aap anirudh ko serial jaisa hi dikjao u know samaaz mai badlaw lane ke lie nd trilochan kaka bhi bondita ki galtiuo le gussa ho nd jaise serial mai hota h waisa kuch. nd bondita bhi ye samaj ke poorane soch ka shikar bane nd of crse mini ka bhi..pls try to ad these point.nd i promise it will b interesting to read this...plzzzz..