@The_FalliNg_PoTatO thank you for the kind words! Then goes same to you. If u want to write, go for it. Your story has a good plot and writing, it will gain attention later on.
Plus, it's not only the number of reads and votes determine how great one's writing skills or story. You can trust me on this, you are a great author, and you'll gain your confidence in writing back, cause you have the potential. That's all I can tell you.
(I'm not good with encouraging words, but this is the best I can do TvT)