wintrydaze

@IMASECRETYOUCANTTELL *hugs* You've motivated me to write and publish faster XD That was just an omake but I'll try and release the next chapter before the end of April.
            
            It's really nice to hear a reader's perspective of the story, it helps to know what has been conveyed, thank youuuuu!! 
            
            For the important scenes, I see that some fanfics have their OCs replace the roles of some other characters, and I didn't want to do that here. Renka should have her own role to play, alongside the original BnHA characters.
            
            Aww <3 yes the cinnamon rolls will fight, grow, provide some fan service here and there before falling fully into love hehe. Can I check if you're following the manga or the anime? Or just fanfics? Just so I don't accidentally say spoilers while we're chatting.
            
            Thank you! They're my first full-fledged OCs and I'm not too confident about portraying them, so I'm really happy they interest you. You're absolutely right, characters that aren't developed properly would only feel fake/2D and are hard to grow attached to.
            
            Aww thank you, of course we can be friends! It doesn't have to be for motivation or anything, you can talk to me any time too (sorry for replying late)!

I'm actually really looking forward to your updates!!and I love how she's not too much exposed to important scenes just like the villain attack, plus me too I just can't seem to picture out those sweet little cinnamon rolls having a love life yet, yeah a few sweet moments are appreciated and I'm fangirling hard cause of them but the Cinnamon rolls are just too focus on their dreams of becoming heroes. 
            
            You don't have to worry about your OC being inadequate they are really fascinating, they have their own character that they stick to, they have their own roles that they complete and I say having to portray a character/persons characteristics is important in building an image for the person you want the readers to see
            
            And your very much welcome and if you need someone to motivate you( but I'm not sure if I can) your welcome to talk to me and I will be happy to hear you share with a person such as I so what I want to say is I like you so can we be friends?

@IMASECRETYOUCANTTELL Ahhhhhh!! Thank you so much T^T I'm always worried that the story or OCs are inadequate so your sweet words really made my day! 
            
            Yes, as a BnHA Various! story, the romance will probably be slowburn-ish to balance the scenes with the different 'love interests'. Most of them are only 14 now and very focused on their goals so I can't see them plunging headfirst into love. Those scenes will increase once we've gotten far enough to split into different routes so please bear with me meanwhile!
            
            Aww, I'm super happy it made you feel that way!! I hope the future action or battle scenes will give you the same or even more excitement ^^

@GreenFlame000  Thanks for writing it! I like the concept of using a random generator.

@Palastyn_Chroma <3

❤️❤️❤️ I love this review so much! Thank youuu!  My heart is melting from just reading this ❤️❤️❤️

@Palastyn_Chroma You're welcome, you totally deserve them and more! Nooo enjoy is such an understatement. I LOVE it!! I really think it's good enough to be published. 
            
            The character development is beautiful (and painful). I love yet am scared of how it feels like it's gonna become a 'Good VS Evil' (Aeron VS Aerra) especially when they love each other so much. I'm very happy that you didn't follow cliche personality stereotypes. I liked how you portrayed the High King's cunningness.
            
            There's a sense of trepidation throughout because readers are kept guessing how, or if, things will go according to MC's predictions and the prophecy. And now the intriguing conspiracy theory~ Yet there also are funny moments especially with those ambiguous *cough* words by the guys here and there. 
            
            Most characters are also rather likeable. I do feel that the parents could've been shown more, though it's understandable they weren't since they weren't exactly that involved in their children's lives.
            
            You've managed to help us learn about the lore and a bit about MC's past life (during the lying game) without making it seem like an info dump.
            
            The adventure parts are also thrilling and unpredictable. I never know what situation the MC will land in or how she'll get out of whatever she's in... though I really just wish MC can catch a break and just be happy, sigh.
            
            All in all I really love your story, thank you so much for writing and sharing it <3