wiselemonpie

I may or may not have forgotten that I was writing this. 
          	I’ll try to finish this, so let’s see how it goes.
          	Later, xx

wiselemonpie

I haven’t written anything in a month I’ve been busy with exams and practices. I think I’ll start writing again in June. 
          I honestly only have 2 chapters and a half and I want to at least have three before I post, in case it needs corrections to prevent inconsistencies.
          Again June 1st, I will write more chapters. However I’ll try to write or post before then if I don’t cry after the exams. XD. 
          Spoilers........ 
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          -You could say someone has a bullet in their leg.
          -You can’t just shoot people.
          -You shot me.
          .......
          I guess it’s pretty obvious who said what. XD

AddyStyles8

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Ok.. Clara is a good person but I don't like her. I don't know why don't ask me.. I absolutely hate Mateo and I'm a SIMP for Ryon and Avalena.. 
          Ryon is so understanding, Avalena needs someone like him, not that fucker Mateo. And Clara, she's annoying, jumping into conclusions too easily, getting mad without thinking the if she's right or wrong, like that part when she didn't even  hang up properly on Ryon and started talking to Max and conn then again getting angry at him for him being rightfully mad.

wiselemonpie

Oh idk if you read the ending, but spoilers ahead,................:....................<<<<<<<Avelena ends up as mateos’s friend just that
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wiselemonpie

I totally understand your point, mateo has flaws, i’m not gonna defend him. Clara is annoying too, she just can’t understand feelings very well. That’s just her nature. I tried to create someone not perfect, not superior but you could say a learner maybe and she really can’t express her own feelings. Mateo was hurt and he didn’t take it very well, I tried to make that conception that some people can’t overcome rough patches easily. But you do have a point I’ve never thought  about Ryon and Avalena, if I did I would have probably added a twist, yes I like it
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wiselemonpie

I will apologize in advance. I’m just starting classes but exams are next week. Normally I write the whole week when I remember but now I think I’ll have to just leave it for the weekend. I’m pretty sure I’ll still post but just in case. 
          Anyways in case I forget I’ll post two some other day or something, when I have time. 
          Have a nice day(s)!