I was almost feeling hype with this story of yours, and almost saying this could be put into a movie..but OMG! you really made me swallow all my positive thoughts of that story..how come you end it that way..i was kinda angry at you..after all what Lauren and the Morellos have done, they end up all dead?!?!wtf!!! I was about to say this is one of the best Camren fanfics I've read, but i won't..that was an unsatisfying ending.
Anyway this is all my opinion. Maybe that's your thing---writing different from the "mainstream" love stories we know.
Thank you still for sharing your talent with us.
But please, make a happy ending for camren fanfic next time, please? Ms.Lauren Jauregui may have hate these fanfics, but its the only thing that make us believe that atleast, all is fair in love---and yeah camren.❣️
Again, thank you for your story. Keep writing and more power!