wishtells

I was editing TPOL and the number of times I've written Roop and Agastya instead of Varahi and Avyaan is insaneeee (⁠╯⁠︵⁠╰⁠,⁠)
          	I just hope wattpad doesn't mess up with my edited version again. Last time, I remember editing a chapter and when I opened it the next day, it was same as it was, soooo yes :)
          	I'm editing it guyss ;)

Navyaversee

@wishtells Tqsmmmm༎ຶ⁠‿⁠༎ຶ ◉⁠‿⁠◉
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wishtells

I was editing TPOL and the number of times I've written Roop and Agastya instead of Varahi and Avyaan is insaneeee (⁠╯⁠︵⁠╰⁠,⁠)
          I just hope wattpad doesn't mess up with my edited version again. Last time, I remember editing a chapter and when I opened it the next day, it was same as it was, soooo yes :)
          I'm editing it guyss ;)

Navyaversee

@wishtells Tqsmmmm༎ຶ⁠‿⁠༎ຶ ◉⁠‿⁠◉
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wishtells

Hello guys 
          What do y'all think about Beyond Beauty's initial chapters, or all the chapters abhi tak. Do y'all find it cringe or sm, I mean, I really want to know what you feel about the story lately? Please share I really want to know this :(
          
          Thankyou 
          Love, love and lots of love to you <3

Navyaversee

@wishtells Every chapter has been amazing so far. It’s just that the last few chapters after the gala felt a little boring, but it’s okay — I don’t think anyone will pay that much attention to it. But now, please get them married because the story is starting to feel stretched. So just bring in the marriage phase already!
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IshaJoshi3

@wishtells initially I loved the characters. They created some magic, some attraction, they had a charm. Their short but meaningful communication was clear. And honestly when Tpol editing went on parallel, beyond beauty Chapters which come hardly a month, doesn't even move forward the story. Maybe in you mind you have lived and created a bond between them, you must have imagined a lot of unwritten talks (like every writer does). But we have not been conveyed the flaw of their new bond..It feels like we have jumped from their meeting last month to this month meeting..missing the in between moments. Moreover Too many characters mentioned, suddenly, sometimes not mentioning the existing ones..created a lot of confusion. Like i actually dont know how many cousins agastya have! And Sometimes I feel like I know what Agatsya feels or wants and says but Roop's still stuck somewhere. Somewhere you mentioned about her look or her appearance.. which is still a mystery why his mom rejected her.. that better be something solid.. i really have high hopes becoz of initial chapters. Last 5-7 chapters.. specially after gala were not something i seriously liked much. These are my opinion. You are a good writer, and i have loved you creativity. You know I never wish to insult your story or you. Writing because you asked. But u better focus on your exam right now. I really want story to get its original charm and flaw. :-) love and best wishes always.. (ps. I hardly ever write to writers. You are special one. Pls consider it)
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littlerabbit357

it is a great story! loved the way it’s written!!  
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wishtells

Hi guys (⁠〒⁠﹏⁠〒⁠)
          I'm sorry, I don't think I'm even in any position rn to apologise for repeated late updates, but I've my exams going on, and I'll get free by the end of this month. I won't say or promise anything about the updates again but yes, please take it has a hint ;)
          
          Alsoo, I was studying and just to take a five minutes break, I opened wattpad (after a very long time, btw) and I randomly picked a chapter to read of Beyond beauty and I noticed I've written two different names for their aunt in the same chapter only, what the heck tho ༎ຶ⁠‿⁠༎ຶ I'm sometimes too confused with the name, I'll edit it once I'm completely done with everything and has nothing on my plate except writing :)

wishtells

@wishtells compromise* ಥ⁠‿⁠ಥ
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wishtells

@IshaJoshi3 Thank you so much ;) lol, is it? I'd still listen what you had to say. Yk, I'm actually very productive when I've exams but I'm holding myself back this time :) can't compromised with the result actually. I'll be there soon, yes. Alsoooo, I'd still listen what you had to say ;)
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IshaJoshi3

@wishtells same here..i used to be very productive during exams :-p but ofc we have to focus ! And i was going to say.. you have forgotten Agatsya and us as well.. so wanted to remind you that you are a writer on wattpad and you readers waiting for update.. you better write soon or i will not comment on your any of the upcoming chapters  coz i almost forgot where the story left..and had to reread the last chapter. And seriously too much gap looses our interest in story.. but anyways, as you have already given excuse for this month, i wish you come back soon with back to back long and full of content chapterS. :-)
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