Ello my loves! I am messaging you all in a cry for help! I really need some help/support on my last 3 chapters that I have posted....The first four I have gone through and tweaked (still not perfect, but good for now) but I haven't really had any feedback on my later chapters. I'm getting stuck on how to change some things even though I know some serious editing needs to be done. If anyone has time, can they read through and let me know what they think needs work or suggestions on how to make it better? I cant continue the story without feeling mildly okay with what I have.