kareenaff

Hello dear aapki story mujhe kafi achhi lagi .. kya aap ek esi story likh sakte ho jisme amar bhi ho aur anubhav dono hi ho .. esa kuch dikha sakte ho kya ki anubhav kabhi mara hi na ho aur na hi gaddar ho .. aur aap usme anushma seen bhi add kar dena .. 

withtherains

@kareenaff I understand so much was left unsaid in show! I will try either of your suggested ways and work on it as and when possible. Thank you for suggesting! :) 
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kareenaff

Qki show me to anubhav k Marne k baad uska zikr tak nhi kiya na hi hm ne aur na hi ks ne aur ye pata karne ki koshish bhi nhi ki kya sach me anubhav sach keh raha tha ya jhuth kuch .... Qki jab hm ne ks ko goli mari thi to ks ne uske bare me socha tha ki koi to majburi hogi ki usne goli chalai.. aur wo esa nhi kar sakti lekin apne bhai k bare me ek baar bhi nhi socha jise wo bachpan se janti hai jiski wo itni fikar karti thi.. aur anubhav bhi apni bahan k liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai..  
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kareenaff

@kareenaff thank you.. agr aap isi me add kar dete to bhi chalta but koi nhi.. like mission ko re open karke ya kuch esa clue mila ho .. aap ye bhi dikha sakte h ki ks aur hm dono ek dusre se naraz hai khafa hai jese har baar in dono ko milane As aata hai to is baar bhi As aaye .. 
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