Hello I was wondering if you would be kind enough as to check out my story incredulous and give me your honest opinion upon what you think. Normally I would ask some friends or family or followers that I’m close with to do so but I feel like by asking around with a couple of more random people they would be able to provide me with a more honest view. If you are not into the type of story I’m writing I completely understand and it can also change your point of view on it but all I ask is if you tell me what you think about the description of each chapter the details the plot so far, grammar, word choice etc. you needn’t feel inclined to vote since I’m only asking for feedback you can either comment the feedback post on my wall or just p.m. me it. If you do not have time or if you do not want to I completely understand and I think you for your time.
