wolfguide

Hey I'm writing a story that I want to be published as a book and I want you guys to tell me what you think I'll only be posting part of it as its still really rough, I'll be posting it as soon as I hear if you want to read it
          	Give me some idea's, thoughts, comments and I want some criticism to help me improve my writing 
          	Please tell me everything
          	Wolfguide 

wolfguide

Hey I'm writing a story that I want to be published as a book and I want you guys to tell me what you think I'll only be posting part of it as its still really rough, I'll be posting it as soon as I hear if you want to read it
          Give me some idea's, thoughts, comments and I want some criticism to help me improve my writing 
          Please tell me everything
          Wolfguide