Loved your book
Greatest ff ever considering the fact that it was your first work
Well your book was great for starters.
Amazing way of writing cause almost ALL the newbiessss these days write the so called 'cute' sentence in there stories in a tremendous amount that I leave the story mid way or even before.
Your story didn't contain absolutely unnecessary statements like : " tae huffed a deep breath into his mouth with his cheek bulging out looking just like a cute polar bear with pink plumpy pouty lips looking like a total cuddle bear and blah blah blah blah " ufffffffff it's so damn cringe
So overall it's was a great book..
I found this book from ' Best Taekook recommendations ' and it's was a great time I invested in your creation .
Great work <3
@LOokingforJiminsJaMs Sure, if you like! It's called "My Friend," and is essentially an account of my teenage years - the real-life story that inspired me to write Squire. I hope you find it interesting...
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