Hey, I read your story and really liked it. However, try using more synonyms. In the first chapter you wrote "person" repeatedly Instead of that you can write "individual " or "figure " and if you don't want the readers to know about their race (human , elves ) , write " being ".
Chapter 1 :
You can describe the clothes. For example , your chracter is wearing a black cloak , or a robe that's why we don't know their identity.
If you don't want the gender to be revealed use they , them Instead of him / her .
I am also a new writer. So, check out my story and try to find my mistakes because I'm horrible at rechecking.
