wreckingball12

So i am going to restart the renesme book only because i just realized how bad the plotline is and i honstly am takeing some of this advice from mycastleofbooksand i realizedthisbut dont you guys worry, there will be a new copy of thebook up soon and i hope you will not be mad . Thanks to all of my followers. Wreckingball12~ ashley darling

wreckingball12

So i am going to restart the renesme book only because i just realized how bad the plotline is and i honstly am takeing some of this advice from mycastleofbooksand i realizedthisbut dont you guys worry, there will be a new copy of thebook up soon and i hope you will not be mad . Thanks to all of my followers. Wreckingball12~ ashley darling

mycastleofbooks

Your Renesmee story is junk. Honestly. There are countless grammar and spelling errors. There is no plot, and your failed attempt at a plot twist makes no sense. Plot twists need to have clues leading up to them and make the reader facepalm and think "Why didn't I think of that?!" Your 'story' doesn't do that. Having Aro randomly kidnap her doesn't fit in with the plot. You never had Aro plan to come to Forks.
          
           Normally, I would suggest heavy editing sessions, but that will not suffice for this. You ought to just delete the story, write out a plot outline and character summaries, and try again. Sorry, sweetie. 
          
          Don't call me a hater, I gave you detailed constructive criticism.Hope that you take at least SOME of my advice. Also- don't think that your writing is better than mine because you have more followers. The majority of them are follow-backs.
          
          May the odds be ever in your favor,
          MaryClaire

bookgoddess11

May the odds be ever in your favor too.
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UnBearablyOutThere

Remesmee is a brilliant book! Keep writing! Honestly, I voted and fanned!
          I was wondering if you could be ever so courteous and give my book a go? http://www.wattpad.com/story/8601303-catching-renesmee
          Thanks!
          XOXO

wreckingball12

Well of course i will do it now
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wreckingball12

well thank you sorry this took for ever so busy I will keep writing thanks
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