holyun_holyun

Do well in your exams and don't worry! I'm here and waiting you don't need to stress Okie??? Fighting ∞

holyun_holyun

@writeRayOfsun it's okay, don't worryy you can update whenever you are free okay? Take care
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writeRayOfsun

@IHVZVL yes thankyou so much my exams ended but I was just busy 
            I will try to update soon muffin : )
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holyun_holyun

How are your exams going??

holyun_holyun

@writeRayOfsun your welcome :›
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holyun_holyun

@writeRayOfsun don't worry about the update, do well in your exams and rest okayy???
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writeRayOfsun

@CQUNAJH okayishh : ( 
            On the bright side on Sunday I will post a new chapter .... hehe ❤️
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MSufyan366

So I read your completed story 4 days ago I forgot to give you a review so I am doing it on the basis of how much I remember about your story since I read it few days back so I hope my critical review will be helpful first of all your wrting skills are good you definitely can be one of best writers if you put more effort so I think  first of all what you need to do is while writing story is to keep your as simple as possible don't use much difficult vocabulary since it feels dry and many readers like me will not continue the story bcz those dry words will not spark our interest like eyes never lie is a good book but I left it in mid bcz I think the wrting skills of writer was so dry and it didn't spark interst in me second is  keep the plot strong and start giving hints and relatable information about the disaster which going to happen in middle of the story or end from the start for understanding this thing I suggest you to watch some good horror movies and physiological thriller and by combining two or three movies think of some plot for your story first think the whole plot of the story in your mind and than write it on paper and read it if it excites you than publish your story so you know if it excites me readers will also love it I just remember this much after reading your other story I will tell you anything else if needed when your other stories will be completed and keep writing it gonna take time maybe 1 year or even two for you to make your name just don't lose your hope

MSufyan366

@MSufyan366 it means that the words you are using are dry like simple words with simple lines are more interesting instead of more formal words I don't know how to explain you like use the most easy form of vocabulary which a person who isn't that good in English can understand easily use the most easy form if any language to write your story bcz mostly people aren't the fan of literature they just want to the point ff with interesting story and smut this is all you need
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writeRayOfsun

@MSufyan366 thankyou so much muffin for this review.  I have one question though I didn't understand what do you mean by dry writing skills , can you elaborate so I can work on it ?
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