writer_on_the_storm

Just posted the first half of my short story, "Little Miss Valentine"
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/138618636-little-miss-valentine
          	
          	Please feel free to let me know what you think?!

JessiYork

I'd love to maybe exchange critiques on our stories sometime! :)

writer_on_the_storm

Hey, I was happy to see your comments the other day!!  I am still wondering which story would you like me to read?
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writer_on_the_storm

Sure! Which story shall I critique?
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