About your story. I really like it and I hope that you will continue it. And as for ideas um… well you can have a major villain that they have to get rid of and
Along the way make love bloom even more and just Add some curve balls to the story to keep the people guessing. But this is just an idea. You don't have to do it if you don't want to. Also you are a great author!!
@sailormoon966 omg thank you so much I'll defenitaley heed your advice I don't know I feel like people aren't as interested so ya know I have to kinda add detail so I am very happy to hear your enjoying my stories