Vini

Chapter 3 is now out guys! Please leave me a feedback. I am excited for the next couple of chapters as we're going to get into action soon.
          I just published "Chapter 3" of my story "A Twist Of Fate". https://my.w.tt/CZSKDf62Zab

Second chapter ready to read!  Leave your opinions.  Thank you.
          I just published "Chapter 2" of my story "A Twist Of Fate". https://my.w.tt/z30NTpXr35

Hello guys!! I posted my new story "A twist of fate", the first chapter is ready to read.
          It's a fantasy story with romance, drama and action.
          Your feedback will be appreciated for a new writer like me.
          Thank you again!

New story! Please check this out and leave your feedback guys
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/222471328

Eid Mubarak! Wishing everyone a happy Ramadam

wow vi, really WOW!
          you have REALLY, REALLY, REALLY, REALLY improved a lot in 'it lives in the woods'
          congrats, vi, really...
          you are doing wonderful...
          
          but the settings must be elaborated a lil more, vi...
          then you are close to being very good...
          
          yup, we just sat here and read all the chapters of both of your works....
          we'll definitely watch out for your works from now on...

yeah, we read your bloody mary....
          
          you should elaborate it a lil more, vi...

and if you read any stupid or insulting comment like 
          kicking one of your story male character in the b0lls, 
          or stuffing someone's d!ck into someone else's mouth, 
          or any such atrocious nonsense, 
          
          please understand that, that particular comment will be from our shameless brothers...
          they do it with all the authors...
          in one particular story, they politely asked the author -
          "please, please, may we kick him in the b0lls now?" about the male character in the story...
          and posted it too....
          
          we girls felt so ashamed, but it was done nearly few hours before we logged on and many people answered it too....
          
          so, please do not feel bad when you read such useless comments from our account...

vi,
          please specify the 'author's note' (A/N)
          then put in your words, then draw a line.. maybe like 
          ~~~~~~~~ 
          or 
          %%%%% 
          or something else so that the readers get to know the story part and the author's note part
          some of the authors we have read so far have also missed this 'partitioning' and it sort of does not feel okay...
          then, about the work you have started....
          
          you are NOT 'just a silly girl'... 
          you are ours and you are definitely doing good... 
          
          DO NOT downplay your talent... EVER
          and all the other things you have told before the story can be categorised under 'intro to myself'
          
          also, read a lot of comics and watch a lot of English serials... 
          you will know what to do ...
          
          luv ya, vi
          
          Anna n fam, India

hey vin, (is it okay if we call you vi?)
          
          we are all 14 year old.
          by ALL we mean 7 boys and 5 girls.
          we worked and purchased our own laptops, but we are not allowed to go into any other sites than the educational ones...
          
          so our cousin's mom's friend (our favourite aunt) opened an account on the wattpad and gracefully permitted us to use her account.
          since we are all only 14, she has requested us to keep our identity anonymous so we cannot give you our names and other info.
          
          but as you read our request on Mr. Their's page / account, we live in Bangalore.
          just finished our 8th class and went on to 9th.
          (our school is making us sit and revise all the lessons of the past year!!!)
          
          its great to read your works.
          even if English is not your language, you are doing very well.
          
          there is a secret to doing it even better though:
          try and start thinking in English 
          - helps you get rid of MTI (Mother Tongue Influence) 
          - you get to understand the intricacies of the language.
          
          also, it would help global readers to understand our scenario better if you "prepare" the stage of performance...
          
          that is, introduce the superstition, suspense and other strings that are attached to the mystery in our society when you start writing about our ghosts. 
          (Their ghosts are a bit different from us - like sprinkle holy water and the damn thing evaporates and what not; while ours demands a wizard or some sorcerer to put it to rest and all that - sorry vi, we do not believe in ghosts :-(; please understand, we are NOT mocking (making fun of) you either)
          
          please do not feel offended by our comment to you here... 
          we thought it best to let you know about us here...
          
          we work in the holidays to earn our accessories to school and will not be able to afford the '1000 rupees' for ONE of Mr. Their's books - its really expensive...
           is it okay for you to tell us a lil more about yourself - like where do you live, how many siblings do you have, what are your parents doing - that sort of a thing?
          
          luv ya vi