@writervini17
Hi everyone!! You don’t absolutely have to but if you could, can you check out my new story. It’s completed with 12 chapters and i plan to release it one by one. It’s a teen horror romance focused one reckless boy who’s very hard to hate
https://www.wattpad.com/story/406820338?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=writervini17
Chapter 3 is now out guys! Please leave me a feedback. I am excited for the next couple of chapters as we're going to get into action soon.
I just published "Chapter 3" of my story "A Twist Of Fate". https://my.w.tt/CZSKDf62Zab
Second chapter ready to read! Leave your opinions. Thank you.
I just published "Chapter 2" of my story "A Twist Of Fate". https://my.w.tt/z30NTpXr35
Hello guys!! I posted my new story "A twist of fate", the first chapter is ready to read.
It's a fantasy story with romance, drama and action.
Your feedback will be appreciated for a new writer like me.
Thank you again!
@AnnapurnaShastry Thanks for your kind words! I'm working out the details and I just got an idea for a wonderful plot. I think I am gonna continue this story but only after setting a good overlay. Any advise on how my charecter's pov is, is her thoughts realistic? And what do you think about her until now? If you could be so kind as to describe, it would be really great for me. Thank you!
@writervini17 hello Vinisha, the kids will not be able to come to my place and read the stories anymore. their respective fathers found out about this account and stopped them from visiting me. As for the story, there could have been two flashbacks - about Ivory's dream and her date with that CEO and her irritating him. first, you should try to tell a story, you will know what will happen then, how people will imagine your words, works and your world... then fine tune the details... just think of giving the best story, you will be alright.... Annapurna
New story! Please check this out and leave your feedback guys
https://www.wattpad.com/story/222471328
Eid Mubarak! Wishing everyone a happy Ramadam
wow vi, really WOW!
you have REALLY, REALLY, REALLY, REALLY improved a lot in 'it lives in the woods'
congrats, vi, really...
you are doing wonderful...
but the settings must be elaborated a lil more, vi...
then you are close to being very good...
yup, we just sat here and read all the chapters of both of your works....
we'll definitely watch out for your works from now on...
@AnnapurnaShastry thank you so much! I am speechless right now. Thank you for your valuable time.
yeah, we read your bloody mary....
you should elaborate it a lil more, vi...
and if you read any stupid or insulting comment like
kicking one of your story male character in the b0lls,
or stuffing someone's d!ck into someone else's mouth,
or any such atrocious nonsense,
please understand that, that particular comment will be from our shameless brothers...
they do it with all the authors...
in one particular story, they politely asked the author -
"please, please, may we kick him in the b0lls now?" about the male character in the story...
and posted it too....
we girls felt so ashamed, but it was done nearly few hours before we logged on and many people answered it too....
so, please do not feel bad when you read such useless comments from our account...
vi,
please specify the 'author's note' (A/N)
then put in your words, then draw a line.. maybe like
~~~~~~~~
or
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or something else so that the readers get to know the story part and the author's note part
some of the authors we have read so far have also missed this 'partitioning' and it sort of does not feel okay...
then, about the work you have started....
you are NOT 'just a silly girl'...
you are ours and you are definitely doing good...
DO NOT downplay your talent... EVER
and all the other things you have told before the story can be categorised under 'intro to myself'
also, read a lot of comics and watch a lot of English serials...
you will know what to do ...
luv ya, vi
Anna n fam, India