Heyy author!! I'm really liking your story it has a nice base and a good storyline but.. please don't take this on your heart, but the grammar and the translations needs a little bit of improvement... there are so many AIs out there for you like you can use CHATGPT before publishing the chapter or the story... this way the stories will be more attractive and captivating... I hope this comes handy to you and I am genuinely sorry if my words have hurt you