I think the story is good so far but if you ever create another story then I think readers would appreciate more buildup, instead of an explanation of technology them a terrorist attack right as you dive into the story
Hey so I've posted the first parts of my story and the reason I got them up so quick was cause they were already written lol. Just wondering: What do you think the next part should be about
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