written_creature0411

HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!!!

written_creature0411

I want to let my readers know that I will unpublish my story ‘Menma The Neglected’ to make major changes to the plot and clean it up a bit. The story WILL NOT be gone forever, I just want to change somethings put some in and take some out. It might not be the same but I will keep it as close to the original plot as possible. That’s all and thank you for reading my stories.

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@rtomford71 thank you for being the first vote for my story Menma The Neglected

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@rtomford71 I try my best and you're welcome 
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rtomford71

No problem man it’s a great story. And I don’t see many like that on this app so keep up the good work. 
            
            Also thanks for the follow
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Ok, I know it's like hella early in the morning but I just had a fucking crazy idea for a story, though I don't know if anyone thought of this before, What if I made a story about Rengoku After he died. Hear me out , I was thinking of something like His spirit will leave his body and then he will slowly walk it says mother, who appeared as he was dying if you don't remember, And they will walk off together into this spacial plane where they would sit and chat. And maybe give reincarnated together this is still a work in progress And it just popped out the top of my head popped out the top of my head. Tell me what you think about it

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So I did plan making that chapter I talked about in my latest. And I reread my story as a reader, it didn't go as I planned and I feel that I should rewrite it. But I don't like rewrites therefore I want your, my readers, opinion on it should I rewrite it or do a major editing