writtenbyvbhi

I have uploaded the 15 Chapter of DISORDER. Check it out

talareads123456

Hey Vbhi, I'm being your reader for a long time now. And I love the way you are taking the story. I love the twist and turns you put forward. And don't even get demotivated from other's comment saying they don't understand the plot or something. It's not your fault because they don't understand you can't spoon feed them the whole plot. Because as a reader most of the professional thriller author's  write like this and pls keep going. I really appreciate your efforts. And I am getting a feeling this will be my favourite story. I love the dynamics between the main characters. The yearning,the chemistry everything.
          
          Love from your reader

writtenbyvbhi

@talareads123456 thank you so much for the love and support
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flowerwal

Author... did you stop writing the Vincent  Files ??

flowerwal

Okay thank you❤️ looking forward for it
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writtenbyvbhi

@flowerwal I unpublished it for a while. I'll republish it in the future because it needs some editing and changes for a better outcome.
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Sillybeanns

I’m really confused about Disorder. It feels like the book starts in the middle of a story. There’s no world building of storyline buildup. I went back and read the synopsis, and the book definitely does not line up. I feel like the book summary is the only background you give, and that’s too bad because I really want all the details that you give in the summary put into the story. What’s going on?

Sillybeanns

@writtenbyvbhi 
            
            Hell yeah I am sticking around. I enjoyed reading the chapters you’ve published, but I was confused as heck. The dynamic between the two leads is interesting, and I cannot wait to get into the meat of the story.
            
            
            Thank you for clarifying the structure of the writing. I appreciate it.  <3
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writtenbyvbhi

@Sillybeanns Thank you for sharing your thoughts. The  story is intentionally slow-paced and starts with the present before revealing the past. The buildup,world details and backstory unfold gradually through the chapters and upcoming flashbacks.  
            
            I understand it can feel a little confusing in the beginning,but everything connects as the chapters progress.
            i really appreciate you giving it a read --- hope you'll stick around for the buildup.
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writtenbyvbhi

It's going to be a steamy season Ahead! 
          
          Introducing 'Disorder' -18+
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/403959062?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=writtenbyvbhi

talareads123456

@writtenbyvbhi Omggg 18+!!!! You are spoiling us rotten Vbhi!
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