writteninelectric

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hi everyone! (SPOILERS BELOW)
          	
          	so after thinking about my story ‘becoming hers’ A LOT, i have decided I’m going to rewrite it. i won’t be changing a lot, mostly just editing, but there are some things about the story that i would like to change as my writing skills have improved since i wrote this years ago (i hope) 
          	
          	i know a lot of you who have read my story wish that the ending was different, and sometimes i do too, but i just couldn’t think of how to rewrite the ending. the whole ‘it was just a dream’ thing is so overused. a ‘happy ever after’ with marriage and kids is not how i wanted to end my story because it just doesn’t seem real, because life is shit, and i know this is just a story but not everyone gets a happy ending and i just wanted to portray that in my story. i know the way i ended it was shitty but i wrote this years ago and i was at a really low place, i just kind of wanted to kill someone off to be honest. 
          	
          	as traumatic as it can be, story’s that make me FEEL are my favourite kind of stories, so i hope you all understand why i am keeping the ending the way it is (as much as possible). 
          	
          	thanks for continuing to read this story :)

3Pebbles

Honestly, I assumed you were going to have Lexi succeed in suicide. I knew it wouldn’t be a happy ending, it was very unexpected but f*ck you for making me cry so hard. Great story though and I may have cursed at you for the ending, but I personally think it’s a sign of a good writer if you can make your audience feel and care for the characters so much that they hate you  I don’t hate you, that was an exaggeration but seriously… that hurt. 
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relivingthenightmare

Very excited to reread the story and see what changes you’ve made. One of my favorite books by you! Much love and support! Can’t wait to read it again! 
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writteninelectric

this message may be offensive
hi everyone! (SPOILERS BELOW)
          
          so after thinking about my story ‘becoming hers’ A LOT, i have decided I’m going to rewrite it. i won’t be changing a lot, mostly just editing, but there are some things about the story that i would like to change as my writing skills have improved since i wrote this years ago (i hope) 
          
          i know a lot of you who have read my story wish that the ending was different, and sometimes i do too, but i just couldn’t think of how to rewrite the ending. the whole ‘it was just a dream’ thing is so overused. a ‘happy ever after’ with marriage and kids is not how i wanted to end my story because it just doesn’t seem real, because life is shit, and i know this is just a story but not everyone gets a happy ending and i just wanted to portray that in my story. i know the way i ended it was shitty but i wrote this years ago and i was at a really low place, i just kind of wanted to kill someone off to be honest. 
          
          as traumatic as it can be, story’s that make me FEEL are my favourite kind of stories, so i hope you all understand why i am keeping the ending the way it is (as much as possible). 
          
          thanks for continuing to read this story :)

3Pebbles

Honestly, I assumed you were going to have Lexi succeed in suicide. I knew it wouldn’t be a happy ending, it was very unexpected but f*ck you for making me cry so hard. Great story though and I may have cursed at you for the ending, but I personally think it’s a sign of a good writer if you can make your audience feel and care for the characters so much that they hate you  I don’t hate you, that was an exaggeration but seriously… that hurt. 
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relivingthenightmare

Very excited to reread the story and see what changes you’ve made. One of my favorite books by you! Much love and support! Can’t wait to read it again! 
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writteninelectric

hiiii people!
          i have a new account dedicated to bechloe because they're my otp and i guess im kind of obsessed with them. im writing a few fanfics (i sorta hate myself) and im excited to share them. 
          so my account is @writteninbechloe 
          i hope you're all doing okay and staying safe :))

ShannonMorganlee

@whatever_awaits hiiiiii, Oooo your creating sone new fan fics thats so goooooddd!!! I cannot wait to read them!! I hope your doing okay and well too! Keep staying postive with your writing !!! You do an amazing job 
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writteninelectric

i hate my writing so much

ShannonMorganlee

@whatever_awaits ayyy okay that's fine, I know you get distracted a lot that's just you all over hahaha! I'm going out now so won't be back until later on anyway so text me about 7-8 on messenger. I'll try and remind you if you forgot but you should be okay at remabering. (Have fun doing your work and don't stress or try not too at least ahaha) 
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writteninelectric

yeah alright, it will have to be later though because i have to catch up on a bunch of work so im putting my phone on charge away from me so i dont get distracted lmao
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ShannonMorganlee

@whatever_awaits dude we should have a chat about stuff it will be goood we can have a catch up? :)) 
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