writtingrocks

Update for everyone: I basically rewrote the first chapter of Karate, Skating, and Unknown Bad Guys. Sorry if you liked the original version better, but I wrote it in seventh grade, so I decided it was time to shake the story up a bit. Feel free to coment, I'd like to hear your oppinions and look for ways to improve my writing. 

writtingrocks

Update for everyone: I basically rewrote the first chapter of Karate, Skating, and Unknown Bad Guys. Sorry if you liked the original version better, but I wrote it in seventh grade, so I decided it was time to shake the story up a bit. Feel free to coment, I'd like to hear your oppinions and look for ways to improve my writing.