Hey cupcake
The prologue really struck hard it’s filled with raw pain and heartbreak. The way her husband tells her to leave the house was written so powerfully that it instantly pulls the reader into her suffering. You’ve managed to capture the helplessness, shock, and emotional weight of that moment in such a gripping way. It’s heartbreaking, yet at the same time, it sets such a strong foundation for the story ahead. The writing flows smoothly, making the emotions feel very real and relatable, almost as if the reader is standing right there with her in that moment. It’s a painful beginning, but also one that makes the reader curious to know how her journey will unfold from here