@wwelover21
Hey guys, so I’m trying another story I’m not going to try and redo the liv Morgan one imma just try and do better with any future projects but I did add some smut parts into this story so lmk how yall feel about it and if I should continue it this way.
Hey I read ur book, it’s good. Has a good plot but no offense it gets boring after a while because it seems like the same stuff happens in different chapters. Also maybe add some smut to spice it up if ur comfortable doing that. Other then that the book is good,I hope u don’t mind me giving feedback i mean no disrespect.@wwelover21
Heyy no it’s totally fine, I’m still js trying to get a hang or writing in general so I’m still trying to figure out how it should all play out anddd I tried to put some smut in there but I didn’t know how to put it to make it see right so I’ve been trying to work and figure that out before I do anything else
Also u should add more tags other then girlxgirl so more people can see ur book. The y/n is intersex so u should add a intersex tag and a gp tag
