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@ArvalBecker Thanks! I hope it turns out well.

ArvalBecker

Congrats on getting the nerve to post your writing, many people never make that jump.  Interesting premise and very well done.  The conflict in Michelle's mind is a good place to start and you can take it several ways if you wish.  Just to let you know, your cousins Shannon and Shaun both write on a consistant basis and would be glad to offer suggestions and critiques.  I have been writing for over 10 years myself, and I'll  give you any help you should need.  Quite proud of you for a very nice piece.