sugarXcoated

Hey I don't mean to sound demanding or anything but I am writing a Hemlock Grove fanfic and would like someone who is already writing one to see if it is any good and that i got the characters right. 
          
          P.s
          U don't have to 

x2bbblediscoqueen

I checked out your story 'Innocence', and found it was very cute and interesting. Other than a few grammatical errors, I see it having potential! The characters did seem to line up right with a few added quirks. A recommendation I have is to create a little bit of conflict, only for the reason that not everyone gets along due to views and beliefs. Love the usage of different P.O.V.'s! Keep up the good work!
            
            ~Disco Queen  
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