I checked out your story 'Innocence', and found it was very cute and interesting. Other than a few grammatical errors, I see it having potential! The characters did seem to line up right with a few added quirks. A recommendation I have is to create a little bit of conflict, only for the reason that not everyone gets along due to views and beliefs. Love the usage of different P.O.V.'s! Keep up the good work!
~Disco Queen