x4naxw_
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Good afternoon my little sunshines <3
My pc basically exploded so I’m writing this on my phone. I honestly don’t know when I’ll be able to publish the next chapter (which should be nastily long and with loads of action finally) because like I just said, my pc broke and I must do a backup. However I don’t know how, ‘cause like- it WONT turn on.
So yeah I’m pretty screwed, I’ll try to take my precious pc somewhere so they can at least get them files out T-T. But hey, at least I have all my passwords saved so I can access all of my accounts including this one.
Now I wanna talk about the book TGWSD :’)
So basically there was a comment a few days ago that gave me a reality check (girl tysm if you’re seeing this, I really mean it). This Y/N is a TOTAL pushover?! Like- grow some backbone, bitch. Totally my fault, but hey, it can be fixed. Soo I changed core details here and there to make her more of a *hopefully* relatable selfish bitch with a nice character development. Which means that from this point on there wont be anymore plot holes and every question can finally be explained.
Or if you guys do like the pushover bitch we can always keep her, but of course I’ll do massive polishing because I don’t want her to be a Mary Sue (the choice is yours, so tell me!). Also another thing- whoosh this book will be hella long, ESPECIALLY the second part (wink wink Youmeko). This is because the characters will have a more detailed (non canon help) background. The reason for this is because I love drama and the anime doesn’t really tell us shit about our beloved boys and girls.
I don’t think I have anything else to say, besides a good luck to everyone starting school or university. I only gave 3 of my exams and my study session were unproductive. Please don’t be like me take college srsly…
Bye and have a wonderful day.
yumekoj123
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@ x4naxw_ hii my sister in crime, don't worry about your book you got this! I did realize y/n was a little helpless but I always thought that's what you wanted her to be. Anyway, I've once gotten critics too and as you're saying, it can be fixed. In the end what matters is that not only the readers are satisfied, but most of all that YOU are happy with your own story. What I'm saying is just do what feels right for you and sometimes critics can really open your eyes and make your story better (source: own experience) <3 I'm HELLA excited for the second part oml and you're so right, Death Note doesn't give us shit lol. Have a nice evening *sends hugs*
