Hello beautiful! I read your story and I like it. Something you should think about is that you intend to rush the chapters some, so maybe you could put some more "facts" into it... I like that you get the hole idea of fame into it all, like all the hate Miley gets! And geez woman that make my heart raise! Haha anyways I like it and I hope you continue to write!
Many kisses Jenna! <3