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Heyo, I just posted chapter one (1) of 'Forgotten Promise'!

Hello, I am currently close to posting a few (possibly one by one) chapters from "Forgotten Promise" but there are quite a few things that have changed - plot-wise. I felt that there were some holes in it and that the attitude change with Gakuhou was too sudden.
          
          So, I have made adjustments - this is a sum up of what has changed - so far - (Please tell me if any changes bother you, if there is a problem, I will try my hardest to fix it!)
          
          Number One (1): Gakuhou won’t be as 'unsure' of his decision to place Gakushuu in e-class.
          
          Number Two (2): Instead of Gakushuu having friends that he had met at a cafe, he will have online friends.
          
          Number Three (3): The reaper will make an appearance (that’s all I can say for now - no spoilers •-•).
          
          Number Four (4): I will make some characters - such as Ren Sakakibara or someone (possibly multiple someone’s) from the 'big give' minor antagonists.
          
          Number Five (5): This is a minor change, but I feel I should add it. I realized that in the manga Gakushuu’s appearance was 'blonde hair, brown eyes - so I decided to make his hair blonde and keep his eyes a violet-y purple, mixing manga and anime!)
          
          This is what has been changed so far - as I said if there are any problems or concerns you may have, please feel free to speak up about them.
          
          (Also, I am curious as to if I could or should add a ship? It would be a romantic partner for Gakushuu. But I’m not sure if you all would like to have romance involved in this story. If you do not, feel no pressure to go along with it - I can make other stories containing my ship - and I’m perfectly fine with this story having no romantic relationships.
          
          To add to that, my ship is quite odd - don't worry, it is not illegal - as in there is no age gap more than six years with s*xual ministrations - the character I ship with Gakushuu is his age. It’s just that there are no interactions with them in canon, so I do not wish to start a fight or argument about it.)

Hey, how are you ?
          
          Did you suppress your story "A promise long forgotten" ? Bcs i'm not able to find it anywhere... which is a bit sad since i was looking forward reading new chapters.
          
          Anyway, it's your story, your choice. But i want to let you know that it was a really good story, and that i enjoyed reading it.
          
          I hope you'll see my message.
          One of your readers.